Get in-depth feedback on your feature-length screenplay and a full hour of personal coaching to talk it through.

This package includes:

• Full read of your feature-length script

• Your marked-up script returned with embedded notes

  • Notes made as the script is read for the first time (cold read)

  • Review and analysis after the cold read to create coverage report

• 8-10 page comprehensive coverage report

  • Suggested logline for pitching and promotional use

  • Big-picture feedback on story premise, setting, plot, structure, format, pacing, and theme – particularly as related to specific genres

  • In-depth character and dialogue notes

  • Suggestions to strengthen stakes, conflict, and emotional impact

  • Thoughts on marketability and next steps

• One-hour 1:1 coaching session with Neil (on Zoom)

  • Walk through the notes together

  • Ask questions about any part of the feedback

  • Brainstorm solutions for weak spots and problem scenes

  • Talk strategy: contests, rewrites, and what to do next with the script

You’ll also receive a recording of the coaching call, so you can rewatch it, pause, and take deeper notes as you revise.

Ideal for writers who want more than just written notes – you want a real conversation about your script, what’s working, what isn’t, and how to push it to a professional level.

Please note, your script will never be run through AI for notes, analysis, or coverage. Every package I offer is 100% human, 100% me, and done with personal insight, care, and attention to your story.