Your Script Deserves More Than Just “Coverage”
Transform it into a market-ready screenplay – and level up your writing in just 90 days.
The Rewrite to Greenlight Method is a hands-on development experience for film professionals who are ready to turn promising scripts into professionally polished, pitch-worthy screenplays.
If your draft has potential, but something is still off – and you’re not sure what it is, you’re in the right place.
You’ve Put in the Work. So Why Isn’t It Landing?
You’ve got the characters, the concept, the scenes you love.
But something’s not clicking, and you’re not sure what’s missing.
Sound familiar?
- You’ve gotten generic “notes” from coverage services… but no real direction.
- You’ve rewritten your script multiple times, but still don’t feel confident sending it out.
- You’re not sure if your story works… structurally, emotionally, or in the current market.
- You’ve been told you need to change aspects of your script in order to get to the next level, but you don’t know how to do it.
- You know it could be great, but you need a second brain to help bring it to life.
What You Actually Need Is a Partner, Not a PDF.
This isn’t a coverage service.
This is a collaborative rewrite process guided by an award-winning screenwriter and story expert, built to elevate your work and your skillset.
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Introducing: The Rewrite to Greenlight Method
A 7-step, 90-day hands-on development process that takes your script from “almost there” to “let’s shoot this.”
You’ll get:
Here’s How It Works (7 Steps to Greenlight):
- Greenlight Strategy Session
Clarify your vision, goals, concept, and audience before we touch a page. - Trend Tracker
Measure your script against genre winners so it lands where it matters. - The Cold Read
Expert first impressions + detailed feedback that goes beyond surface notes. - Character Compass
We’ll look into what your characters want, need, and how they evolve. - The Gut Check
Scene-by-scene breakdown of what hits, what lingers, and what doesn’t. - Personality on the Page
We elevate dialogue, voice, rhythm, and pacing so the script feels alive. - The Rewrite Roadmap
You get a clear, actionable plan after every draft. That means no more guesswork.
Why Work With Neil?
When it comes to the modern movie landscape, great stories used to be the norm. Now, they are the exception to the norm.
Unfortunately, the movie industry has increasingly become an echo chamber where filmmakers are more concerned with what critics and peers think than connecting with actual audiences.
The industry needs outside voices to get back to its roots of telling good stories that resonate with the movie-watching public, rather than simply other insiders.
I’ve been working in the indie film industry for over 15 years now. During that time, I’ve worked in front of and behind the camera – at just about every position there is on a film set.
I approach every screenplay with a story-first mindset. I’ve seen first-hand that you can have all the production value in the world – cinematography, star actors, visual effects – but if the script is weak, none of it matters.
I’m not just a produced screenwriter, I’m also a working filmmaker.
Because I’ve worn so many hats, I approach every script as a writer, director, actor, cinematographer, producer, and, most importantly, audience member.
Each time I read or write a screenplay, I put myself in each one of these shoes – always asking the question: “Is this what I’m looking for?”
When the answer is yes, you know you have a good story on your hands!
💬 “So… What’s the Catch?”
There isn’t one.
If we work together, I don’t stop until your script is market-ready.
You’ll have a polished, professional draft and the confidence to pitch it.
No ghostwriting. No fluff. Just results.
Still On the Fence? Here’s What You’ll Get From the Call:
- Fast, pro feedback on your concept, hook, and first page
- Clarity on what’s working and what’s not
- An honest recommendation on whether this method is the right fit
No pressure. No hard sell. If it’s a match, we’ll get to work. If not, you’ll leave with more clarity than you came in with.
After fours years of script re-writes, I’d officially lost perspective on my project, and it was time to outsource. I’d come across Neil … and asked him to come up with some script notes. His work was fast, and most importantly helped me see things that I couldn’t. He has a great eye for detail, story, and structure. He’s on my speed dial for the next adventure.
Neil’s work as a script consultant allowed us to find not only the voices of the characters in our script, but bring them to life in an original way.
Questions About The Method
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