How do you show who a character really is – without saying a word?

The answer’s in their actions. What they choose. What they avoid. What they do when no one’s watching.

Using action is one of the most powerful ways to build a character that feels honest, layered, and real. Action is the secret sauce that turns a story character from simple words on a page into someone you believe in.

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In this article, you’ll learn five storytelling tricks that use action – not exposition – to show your characters’ personalities, struggles, and growth.

You’ll read practical, story-changing advice about how to reveal character through action – with real examples that work (and a few that didn’t!).

Prefer to watch, rather than read? Check out my YouTube video on how to reveal character through action below!

5 Ways to Create Memorable Characters Through Action

Let’s get right into the top ways you can use character actions and character traits to create well developed characters in your own writing!

1. Pressure Reveals Inner Values

A glowing tree stands at the edge of a mystical pool under swirling, colorful skies, with the words “Integrity,” “Compassion,” and “Courage” illuminated on its trunk.

When the heat is on, true colors show.

Why Pressure Matters

Everyone can look good when life is easy. But pressure forces your characters to choose – and those choices speak volumes.

We’re talking about the tough decisions. The ones where there’s no clear right answer. Where someone’s going to lose, no matter what.

Want your audience to understand a character’s heart? Put them in a tough spot and watch what they do.

✅ Good Example: Frodo in The Fellowship of the Ring

When no one wants the job of carrying the One Ring, Frodo steps up with just one quiet line:

“I will take it… though I do not know the way.”

He’s scared. He’s unsure. But he still chooses the hard path.

That single moment tells us Frodo is brave, selfless, and morally grounded – without needing a monologue.

❌ Bad Example: Rey in The Rise of Skywalker

Rey finds out she’s descended from Palpatine – the baddest bad guy in Star Wars – and… she shrugs it off with no visible struggle, and no real internal conflict.

She just tells us she’s still good. But we don’t feel it, because we don’t see her earn that clarity through action.

✍️ Try This in Your Writing

Give your character a fork-in-the-road moment where:

The easy option benefits them but hurts someone else.
The hard choice costs them – but protects their values.
No one else can decide for them.

Let their decision show us who they are. Don’t explain it – just let the reader watch it happen. You’ll build trust, depth, and emotional impact.

2. Progress Through Practice

Focused female tennis player prepares to return a fast-approaching ball during a match, with a crowd watching from the stands under a clear blue sky.

Getting better at something is a physical way to show internal change.

Why It Works

When a character struggles, learns, and finally improves, we believe their arc. It’s visual. It’s emotional. And it’s real.

Training scenes, awkward failures, quiet wins – these aren’t filler. They’re your character becoming who they’re meant to be.

✅ Good Example: Daniel in The Karate Kid

Daniel doesn’t just wake up good at karate. We see:

Frustration with training techniques he finds strange
Doubt in his mentor
Painful repetition
Real growth over time

By the time he lands that iconic crane kick, we’re not just cheering for his skills – we’re cheering for who he’s become.

❌ Bad Example: Carol in Captain Marvel

Carol Danvers suddenly powers up without really showing how. One second she’s struggling, the next she’s overpowered.

We don’t see her try, fail, or earn her control. So her big victory feels flat, even though she’s technically winning.

✍️ Try This in Your Writing

Let us watch your character improve at something, step by step:

Show early frustration or failure.
Make learning tied to an emotional goal.
Let mistakes cost them something.
Track how the skill mirrors their inner journey.

They don’t have to be training for battle. Maybe they’re learning to trust, to parent, or to tell the truth. The point is: growth is earned, not gifted.

3. Use Action to Surprise Us!

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Say goodbye to clichés. Surprise us.

Why Unexpected Actions Matter

People aren’t one-note. And the best characters break the mold in small, revealing ways.

These moments don’t need to be loud – they can be quiet and subtle.

Maybe a character does something odd, funny, kind, or deeply human. And suddenly, we get them.

✅ Good Example: John McClane in Die Hard

McClane kicks off his shoes to relax after a flight. It’s relatable and oddly specific.

Later, this choice turns into a huge problem – he’s barefoot, stepping through broken glass while under fire.

That detail makes him feel vulnerable and human. It adds stakes. And it tells us everything about his grit.

❌ Bad Example: Harley Quinn in Suicide Squad (2016)

Harley’s supposed to be unpredictable. But most of her actions are… well, exactly what you’d expect. Sexy, violent, zany – but never surprising in a real way.

She doesn’t show any hidden depth or contradiction. So even her chaos feels empty.

✍️ Try This in Your Writing

Ask yourself: “What would the audience expect my character to do right now?”

Then flip it.

Maybe your tough guy cries during a kids’ movie.
Maybe your loner quietly fixes a neighbor’s mailbox.
Maybe your joker gets deadly serious when someone’s in danger.

Let the action speak. Don’t over-explain. That gap between expectation and behavior? That’s where the magic is.

4. Use Repeated Behaviors

Older man in a light sweater sits by a window, gently holding and looking at a framed photo of a smiling woman, with a nostalgic and thoughtful expression.

Habits speak louder than backstory.

Why Repetition Works

Your character’s daily actions – especially the ones they repeat under stress – show what’s really going on inside.

These tics, rituals, or routines can signal fear, guilt, grief, hope… without a single word of dialogue.

And when those habits change? Boom. We feel the growth.

✅ Good Example: Pat in Silver Linings Playbook

Pat:

Wears a garbage bag under his clothes
Reads his ex-wife’s school syllabus
Runs constantly, compulsively

These behaviors scream that he’s stuck in the past. Obsessed. Hurting.

We don’t need him to say he’s not okay. His actions tell us loud and clear.

❌ Bad Example: Robert Langdon in The Da Vinci Code

Langdon is brilliant – but how do we know?

Because we’re told. Over and over.

He doesn’t really do anything revealing. No repeated behavior. No quirks. Nothing that gives us emotional access to his inner life.

So he becomes more plot tool than person.

✍️ Try This in Your Writing

Give your character a repeated action that means something:

They touch a photo before bed.
They avoid mirrors.
They rewatch an old video clip when alone.

Then, when the moment’s right? Break the pattern.

They skip the ritual.
They throw the photo away.
They finally hit “delete.”

Those tiny moments can hit harder than a dramatic speech.

5. Guard What Counts

A worried woman in a rain-soaked hooded jacket holds a young child in a yellow raincoat tightly as they stand in the street during a downpour, illuminated by soft streetlights.

You learn a lot from who someone stands up for.

Why Protection Reveals Character

A character might talk about love, justice, or loyalty – but who they’re willing to defend (and how) shows their true heart.

And it’s not just about heroics. It’s about emotional investment.

✅ Good Example: Léon in The Professional

Léon starts as a cold, detached hitman. But when he takes in 12-year-old Mathilda, he slowly changes.

He teaches her. Risks his life for her. Eventually, he puts her safety above his own – no speech needed. His actions prove everything.

❌ Bad Example: Newt in Crimes of Grindelwald

Newt is supposed to be kind and loyal. But his choices feel scattered. His protective instincts are vague. He flips between characters without clear emotional stakes.

The result? We’re told he’s caring – but we don’t see it in his actions.

✍️ Try This in Your Writing

Protection = emotional stakes. Use it.

Make your character choose who to defend – and who to leave behind.
Let it cost them something: pride, safety, a promotion, peace.
Track how their loyalties shift across the story.
Let the act of protecting redefine them.

And remember: it’s not always about fighting. Protection can be soft:

Taking the blame.
Holding someone’s hand through grief.
Staying silent when speaking would hurt more.

Who they protect – and what they risk to do it – shows everything.

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The Real Character Test? What They Do

Here’s the deal: dialogue is easy. Action is truth.

If you want readers or viewers to really connect with your characters, don’t just have them talk about their pain, loyalty, or growth – show it.

Let them:

Choose under pressure
Struggle with a skill
Break expectations
Repeat something until they’re ready to stop
Protect someone when it counts

These actions will say more than any backstory ever could.

So next time you’re stuck on a character scene, ask:
“What does this moment force my character to do – and what does that action say about them?”

That’s how you build a character we won’t forget.

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